2. Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is
your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the
regions they belong to
Place and environment in which a person grows plays a vital
role in his life. This essay will examine the impact of place where an
individual grows on his achievements.
To begin with, rural or remote areas lack the facilities
available to people living in cities and towns. For example, there is no
electricity, water, libraries, medical infrastructure and educational
institutes in villages. Due to the lack of these basic facilities, people
living in these places face many difficulties in life. Although many have the
desire to study, they feel handicapped as they do not have access to good
schools and colleges around them. Very often they are poor and cannot afford
moving to cities where they can pursue education. Due to the shortage of
medical facilities, people suffer from diseases like tuberculosis, chickengunya,
malaria etc. This has resulted in many untimely deaths and malnourishment
cases.
To the contrary, cosmopolitan and metropolitan cities are
well developed. They have the best facilities of health, education, housing,
transport, electricity and water supply. This gives people living in cities, better
opportunities to pursue their desires. Children who wish to study can complete
their education in the best institutions. This helps them get jobs in various
sectors of employment. Ultimately, they are capable of achieving greater things
in life than the people in rural areas.
To conclude, I believe that the place in which an individual
grew has an influence on his achievements. Therefore government should develop
the infrastructure in the backward areas so that the country can make complete
use of its resources and progress.
Many people argue that success of an individual depends upon the environment in which he or she has grown up. However, in my opinion, native place’s environment is only one factor and a person’s attitude, capability and determination also play a pivotal role in achieving success.
ReplyDeleteNative environment plays a detrimental role in inculcating traits such as leadership, social skills etc. These qualities an individual acquires over a period of time. The behavior of people in neighborhood, school friends and college friends significantly affects behavior and skills of a person. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi a famous Indian leader received most of his leadership skills from people with whom he spent his childhood time.
On the other hand, it is not only native environment that is responsible for development of an individual and his success. After an individual moves out from his native place to some other place for work he tends to learn new things that he was not aware about at his home place. Moving to other places introduces an individual to new ideas and new ways of doing things. It allows a person to thing in a broad perspective and this open minded thinking plays a vital role in a person’s success. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani a famous Indian businessman achieved all his success only after leaving his home town. While moving to different places he learnt different people and various skills which he was not aware of at his native place. And these new learning helped him rule the business world.
To conclude, only native environment may not be behind an individual’s success. There are a lot of other factors that take an individual towards success.
Hi Pallavi, you have written a good essay. However there are a few mistakes I would like to correct.
Delete1. Its native environment. Native place's environment is incorrect.
2.In the 2nd para you have mentioned that there are detrimental effects of native environment. So by this statement you mean it has a negative effect right? But in contrast to your statement you have given a positive example. So either change the statement or the supporting idea.
3. In the 3rd para, 'learnt different people' is a wrong phrase. you could say 'came in contact with people from various walks of life'